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bemildred

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1. So I dropped it in gedit and that worked fine.

Reply to hunter (Original post)

Sat Mar 31, 2012, 07:22 PM

Mar 2012

I can see what you are trying to do, the only real comment I can make that seems like it might be useful is that your vocabulary/usage seems a bit too modern in places, to me.

Of course for a modern mass market sort of audience, it could be better that way.

YMMV.

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So I dropped it in gedit and that worked fine. bemildred Mar 2012 #1